Overzealous And Premature

You and your ideas are very creative.
And similar to those custom made cars,
Shown at auto shows each year.
With one striking difference.

Although your ideas are terrific as mentioned,
Implementing them would mean...
You'd have to step out of the box with action.
And so far you have played it safe.

By using words you suspect wont offend...
You have manage to get others to listen,
Without producing anything concrete.
To be observed.

And I completely understand that.
Since I am one of action first to produce.
And find I have to correct what I've done,
By asking those I have offended for their forgiveness.
Overzealous and premature without totally satisfying.

poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar
Submitted by Poetry Lover
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