Constructive Criticisms

I appreciate your assessments.
And the time you have given.
But guess what?

'What? '

The value I have placed on my life,
With the knowledge and comprehension...
Of my true identity that took me years to find,
With adjustments made to upgrade my mind.
And what I have obtained in the gaining of it,
Does not depend on your assessments.
Or your vocal beliefs on how I can achieve,
Your acceptance.

'I was just offering constructive criticisms.'

And I was offering my time,
To tell you not to continue the wasting of yours.

poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar
Submitted by Poetry Lover
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