A deliberate deception

It may be sure shot deception
when executed with solid conception
thoughts are integrated and pressed into action
you may have no time to offer any reaction

The river water is deep but not shallow
it will be calm but certainly not allow
to asses its depth and hidden danger
you may look upon it as complete stranger

So is the human being and individual as well
they will hide everything and do not reveal
they may take full care for everything to conceal
close friend even may not know the cause real

Someone cautioned me to be remain vigilant
we know her from the time when she was infant
you may not know her real motive and intention
it is not worth here anything to mention

I had no reason to disbelieve their advice
as I was totally blinded by hollow promises
I had no inkling about deception and trait
still I decided to follow with caution and wait

She may indulge in jokes and often say
'I am double edged weapon' and may block the way
If you try to cheat and commit any blunder
Still I thought it was mere talk and expected no thunder

She was calm and quite but hot headed
remained adamant and never heeded
it was her style of responding in arrogant way
I still preferred close relation and did not stay away

She used to pull me down in unceremonious style
I used to tolerate it for a while
It was not rehearsed to give it final bye
Thought I drove cautiously and made desperate try

Any one may find the alliance as holy
It has to be respected and observed wholly
we can never afford to commit folly
it will be termed as unwarranted and silly

No one cares about what others may think
they will meddle in affairs so much and deliberately sink
they wish to vitiate and make it unbearable
It is pathetic and can not be considerable

Some of the condition do not favor at all
they create distrust and impregnable wall
if no one tries to patch up then it may worsen
there will be collapse in relation all of sudden

We are not used to some of the bad memory
It ends in bitterness and lead to feel sorry
there is unforeseen tension and leads to worry
the relation must be on sound footing and not developed in hurry

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Frozen to Death

I wanted not to be frozen to death
As it was life time wish to remain with
Fear was just gripping me from inside
Chances were there and differences very wide

I can afford no more isolation
As I have developed sound relation
It is fine tuning with you on sound footing
No more trouble ideas are shooting

I can have no peace with disturbed news
My relation with you can’t have any more reviews
It is firm and never getting strained
Little upset thought makes me completely drained

I would prefer death in your hand
This may prove to be real companion and friend
Life can be meaningless if there is no aim
I would love to be very near and earnestly claim

I have placed my existence at your door
I shall be nothing and look very poor
It is you who has made me priceless
I can move among people with bright face

Each day brings me message of love
I remain calm and peacefully drove
You are at heart and very much in centre
No other man can simply occupy the position or enter

Some unknown factors trouble
I loose the patience and fumble
I shiver with some cold in spine
There something more to make me feel fine

I would want that you stay always near
Make me comfortable without any fear
I shall be worry free in your presence
This I feel is true and real essence

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A real taste

No one should share blame
Even if it goes into flames
Love at first sight is God’s gift
I may end later in scuffle and rifts

It may not happen with all
It has nothing to do with fall
You are destined to scale a wall
Consider it challenge or call

You are not in devastation
It is completely out of question
It has direct bearing with some relation
It is in purest form with some indication

It is usual to stay but unusual to part
There is slight deviation even if try to be smart
You can make it holy or unholy
Some one has to share the burden wholly

You may suddenly face the dark
The relation may definitely witness some spark
There has to be some beginning or start
I is better to remain together than to part

Facilitate the break up and you are at loss
In your home you are definitely a boss
Love needs proper nurturing and attention
Any bitterness need not find any mention

It may not find the favor
Though the reason may be minor
We are meant to drive ship
That is taste of the real friendship

You may look calm and quiet
Don’t allow others or let
Sentiments must remain within closed wall
It may certainly avoid the down fall

You are not running away from the scene
Your rift and unreasonableness may clearly be seen
One of you may definitely be keen
You must remain as close as had been

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And If you let......

*Ros-Mum Dah*
If you let go a little
Nothing will settle
You may create an extra space
Lead to emergence of unforeseen race

If you let go a lot
Big battle will be fought
Something more and additional is sought
Your attention is arrested and never caught

As it is rightly said “offer little with good intent”
No hostile reaction later if you say “no” and dissent
This will give you more insight of a stranger
It will save you from possible frustration and anger

There should be careful and permanent attachment
So in case of some set back there is no detachment
It must have some open windows to think and monovour
It must be seen then as complete success in your favor

Why do we accept person who is completely unknown?
Why is that we completely surrender to him and be known?
What does it mean to in our real life for future?
Why do we care for and think for ever to nurture?

It is destiny and decided by almighty to be respected
Inner soul must be searched and thoroughly inspected
It is almost unavoidable must be taken as final wish
How come small creature can survive without water like fish

It is almost certain and likely or bound to happen
Fruits too after certain time are bound to ripen
It is unique experience when events take place at right moment
Nothing can help us whether we remain at centre and make movement

Let someone not fool us or take us for granted
We allow the seeds to grow as per wish when planted
We commit to self and accommodate even at some compromise
Words have to be believed and so on the reciprocal basis the promises
*Ros-Mum Dah*……thought originator

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As promised

He did not turn up as per promise
I knew well in advance that he may surely miss
I still wanted to make it sure for healthy relation
Some how I had bad inkling with no sound indication

He seemed to me as a disgruntled man
Some of his utterances were not good for woman
He disrespected woman in many regards
I was making up my mind not to go in and move forward

I took a calculated risk to give him fair chance
Bluffed him that I have decided to desert home at once
I would be meeting him at an appointed hour
We would then be leaving for unknown destination as tour

He could not decline further as this was going to be crucial
Neither his excuses were favoring nor his weak denial
I waited for him to prove his trustworthiness and reliability
It was rightly going to prove his sincerity and capability

It struck my mind what would happen if he turns out wrong?
I shall have to reconsider my opinion and certainly to go along
It was half given chance to weigh the decision in favor or against
I was not to loose anything as it was solely done on my behest

How easily the relation turn sour if no proper thought is given?
How the girls find themselves in helpless position if stupidly driven?
The tender age does not give them enough chance to think right
They are easily subdued and persuaded not to put resistance and fight

It is good to know a person or girl before entering into alliance
Both can have enough of time to think for expecting any reliance
It definitely gives some indication how far they can go ahead
Whether it will right for them to have nice life to be lead

Not all the bonds result into failure
Some of there are secured and very sure
It is total commitment for the long relation
Something unexpected is ruled out of question

Not all the moves can be suspected
The relation as such must be respected
You will not know a person even if reasonable time is spent
The deception and desertion at any level make anybody totally silent

I learnt a lesson not to trust blindly
It has to be looked from right angle and kindly
It is possible that you are simply lead into believe
The factual things may be different even if you disbelieve

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Be very true

He did not turn up as per promise
I knew well in advance that he may surely miss
I still wanted to make it sure for healthy relation
Some how I had bad inkling with no sound indication

He seemed to me as a disgruntled man
Some of his utterances were not good for woman
He disrespected woman in many regards
I was making up my mind not to go in and move forward

I took a calculated risk to give him fair chance
Bluffed him that I have decided to desert home at once
I would be meeting him at an appointed hour
We would then be leaving for unknown destination as tour

He could not decline further as this was going to be crucial
Neither his excuses were favoring nor his weak denial
I waited for him to prove his trustworthiness and reliability
It was rightly going to prove his sincerity and capability

It struck my mind what would happen if he turns out wrong?
I shall have to reconsider my opinion and certainly to go along
It was half given chance to weigh the decision in favor or against
I was not to loose anything as it was solely done on my behest

How easily the relation turn sour if no proper thought is given?
How the girls find themselves in helpless position if stupidly driven?
The tender age does not give them enough chance to think right
They are easily subdued and persuaded not to put resistance and fight

It is good to know a person or girl before entering into alliance
Both can have enough of time to think for expecting any reliance
It definitely gives some indication how far they can go ahead
Whether it will right for them to have nice life to be lead

Not all the bonds result into failure
Some of there are secured and very sure
It is total commitment for the long relation
Something unexpected is ruled out of question

Not all the moves can be suspected
The relation as such must be respected
You will not know a person even if reasonable time is spent
The deception and desertion at any level make anybody totally silent

I learnt a lesson not to trust blindly
It has to be looked from right angle and kindly
It is possible that you are simply lead into believe
The factual things may be different even if you disbelieve

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Not as per promise

He did not turn up as per promise
I knew well in advance that he may surely miss
I still wanted to make it sure for healthy relation
Some how I had bad inkling with no sound indication

He seemed to me as a disgruntled man
Some of his utterances were not good for woman
He disrespected woman in many regards
I was making up my mind not to go in and move forward

I took a calculated risk to give him fair chance
Bluffed him that I have decided to desert home at once
I would be meeting him at an appointed hour
We would then be leaving for unknown destination as tour

He could not decline further as this was going to be crucial
Neither his excuses were favoring nor his weak denial
I waited for him to prove his trustworthiness and reliability
It was rightly going to prove his sincerity and capability

It struck my mind what would happen if he turns out wrong?
I shall have to reconsider my opinion and certainly to go along
It was half given chance to weigh the decision in favor or against
I was not to loose anything as it was solely done on my behest

How easily the relation turn sour if no proper thought is given?
How the girls find themselves in helpless position if stupidly driven?
The tender age does not give them enough chance to think right
They are easily subdued and persuaded not to put resistance and fight

It is good to know a person or girl before entering into alliance
Both can have enough of time to think for expecting any reliance
It definitely gives some indication how far they can go ahead
Whether it will right for them to have nice life to be lead

Not all the bonds result into failure
Some of there are secured and very sure
It is total commitment for the long relation
Something unexpected is ruled out of question

Not all the moves can be suspected
The relation as such must be respected
You will not know a person even if reasonable time is spent
The deception and desertion at any level make anybody totally silent

I learnt a lesson not to trust blindly
It has to be looked from right angle and kindly
It is possible that you are simply lead into believe
The factual things may be different even if you disbelieve

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An open criticism

I hated most to be called lazy
I keep my self engaged and remain busy
It is funny and very easy
To create flutter and make it noisy

We tend to become idle and relax so much
When not seized with problems as such
It is day to day affairs and must be tackled properly
It is appreciated very much when put across wisely

It is good sign to remain always active
It is equally bad sign if you expose as reactive
People may count you as hostile and immature
It may block your chances and make you insecure

It is not right on our part to offer arguments at criticism
It is known lacuna and allowed in humanism
We simply offer advice or comments without being asked for
It simply creates distrust and situation like mini war

We must learn to sustain the criticism at any cost
It is very severe and considered as worst
Why do we employ double standard when we are at fault?
It adds to woe and agony as if wounds are filled with salt

It keeps you worried all the time for critical remarks
It generates ill will and controversy sparks
It leads to heated arguments and strain the relation
To patch up later on becomes impossible and out of question

It has become now fashion to point out the lapses
No one cares as to what should be done to avert crisis
It is easy to spoil the relation and add fuel to fire
It takes less time to appreciate and admire

Words once spoken can’t be taken back
It may develop bitterness and relation may crack
It may also cause irreparable damage
It may slip out of control to manage

I shall sand to loose in all the respects
Who will search the soul and inspect?
There is something like good humor
It is best weapon in your armor


You inflict injury and your opponent may not come to know
Nice words spoken with sweetness may try to soothe and woe
It is how we tackle and come to an understanding
It is strongest and permanent thing for bonding

Think before doing any criticism and giving reaction
It will have equal force for reaction and action
Where we will be heading for to take refuge?
This is not small task but very important and huge

Let us share the dignity and honor at every stage
It may pen new era on shining page
It is essential to work for common cause
There has to be full stop or permanent pause

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Bitter words

Sun’s direct rays and heat in hot season
Nothing to complain about for any reason
I might have allowed it as casual feeling
Everybody knows and doesn’t expect dazzling

It may not penetrate or cause any harm
Of course it may be hot but not little warm
It is natural and may be expected more
Man will find refuge and feel it was not before

Words spoken with bitterness burn us completely
It will create impact on mind sudden and immediately
You are caught unaware with no defense to offer
Generally what is considered wise is to keep mum and suffer

It may take more time to adjust and recoup
Self assessment for sore relation and slight let up
Insult may cause breakdown with no other way
You may have set back and nothing to offer or say

We may not know what to speak in distress
Mind not at rest and seized with stress
Common sense on run and unable to assess
Hasty action may lead for immediate action to press

Bitter words may bite you slowly
May not allow you to regain immediately
You may find it hard to forget and forgive
You may offer no reaction and remain passive

It is state of mind that only speaks
Not sure of result but inviting future bleak
Damage is done with no possible gain
It is difficult to face insult and pain

Once spoken words with hatred can’t be taken back
Will spoil the relation completely with visible crack
Should not be uttered at all without any sense?
We should have room not to feel tense

Words spoken in friendly way also create tension
Relation will be at stake and in question
It may cause damage and turn it sour
Retrieve the position …………….

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A complete shift

I desired to stay away from committing
I have often acknowledged and still admitting
It is one of the gravest set back for human being
It spoils the image and does not help or bring

The promiss are made to be broken
The words are considereed merely a token
Some of the people may say “I swear”
Soon to find bitterness and eyes with tears

It does not help to assuage the feelings
The hollow words can do little bit of fiiing
It may prove only odyssy or water in desert
It may givee more relief if some short words we insert

It has tremandous effect if afforded to the grieved
This is one of the formost trust already agreed
Let us for the time being forget and shed the greed
It may certainly help in time of the need

What may happen if we fail to turn up?
The doors may remain permenently closed up
It may create the unbridgeable gulf and widen the rift
There may be complete reversal in relation and shift

Do nothing instead of promosing a word
Help little with no assurance and look forward
Feel something inwardly and commit for action
It may be felt little without any reaction

The delibrate part is always condemned
Some people are appreciated and some are damned
It is widely appreciated if promises are kept
It is reflected in eyes when ever suddenly met

You are widely known as man of promise
This may be kept in tact till your demise
The individual may be remembered and not the name
The promises kept are appcited generally without any blame

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Age doesn't matter

Yes it causes me worry
I have unclear mind and feel very sorry
One should stay firm and carry
To fulfill all dreams and marry

As teenager I had fallen in love
It was unusual for me to move
People say” age doesn’t matter”
I have thought of deciding it later

I wanted young and handsome
Who can fulfill my dream?
It has caused me many sleepless nights
I have still a reason to smile and cause for delight

I wanted some one to nurture
Enough of wisdom and mature
Who can grant me bright future?
Take me right with and fully secure

Do I bear any hidden guilt?
Has it got any syndrome in built?
Even if it has, I may wither the storm
The relation may mushroom and remain warm


Do you imagine the state of river when in spate?
Can any one think of it and clearly state?
Has she not the potential to flood and dash?
Is there any reason with her to go for mad rush?

What is state when flood water is receded?
What is condition when demand is acceded?
The calm water may appeal more and more
As I go near to him and simply adore

Others may not accept it but I do
I have though it wise and very true
I shall stay firm and go for it
Wait for glorious moment and gladly meet

It is not mere coincidence or simple chance
One can’t go for it and have a glance
The waves do emanate from deep inside
The conception and realization has remained wide

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I love

I love my creative work and simple friend
They may be from different background and trend
They seem to be gifted with lot of tact
I feel so small before them as matter of fact

I open my self to the close and intimate
Of course their entry in life is very late
I openly admit the fact and state
I accept them with love and never hate

It has bridged my sentiments with them
My endless love flows out of the stem
They unseat me from my position and claim
Very close acquaintance but never put blame

I feel nothing without them but offer no reaction
My eyes always speak for them with action
Young girls come so easily with frank admission
I have no option but to grant the permission

They may go in for any relation they prefer
I need not to stress for it and refer
One gets so much attached with long relation
It is true feeling that leads to the elation

I love to react cautiously with affirmation
It more painful to part with when results in negation
On line relation is not that difficult to maintain
Only you got to remain vigilant and sustain

They may be seen always on line and very active
Laden with problems and seemingly very passive
They may fall easily in line and open up
This is the only link that makes them runner up

Temptation is never fanned by the flame
Once if you are in then don’t feel shame
It produces sweet melody in song
It may remain for long even if you go wrong

I had surrendered and completely fallen through
It was only to her response “how are you”?
I was carrying red hot volcano in burning pot
I asked “will you be positively responding to it or not?


Eyes can’t hide it and tongue can’t speak
I have lost the nerve and become very weak
Slowly I breathe the air and painfully leave
Who to be blame for and made to believe

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Sister in-law

Sister-in-law has got special position
All liberties but close relation out of question
So much praise showered on her with special mention
Husband praises without any hesitation

She stands as half wife for full wife
Vacancy is filled when situation is rife
Not to worry for any good flirt
Wife has to remain quiet but always alert,

No sweet but good and colourful relation,
Happy moments and adding to elations,
No tension and worry when she is around,
You can have easy walk on slippery ground

Husbands take pride in having in law
Don’t find fault or any other flaw
Always ready and anxious to care
Prefer all relation but to be seen no where

Wives too happy and share lenient views
Allows no freedom which is undue
After all, in law is her real sister
Above all, husband is her real mister

So long not married, everything goes well
After her departure, it turns into hell
No one is prepared for stories to tell
It was only phase not much to dwell

Even kids may prefer in law to mother
Not even look in home even at father
This doesn’t drive them crazy any more
No one takes note and stress or bother

This is delicate relation and bound to suffer
Many ups and downs with stories to offer
Many may argue with difference of opinion
After al it is sister-in- law and not the companion

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A way apart

The ways are wide apart
Though we are inseparable part
We bonded together to spend life with pleasure
We both took enough care to make it sure

I always used to look at your charming face
The whole day we used to be away without any trace
I had to rush home by making race
I never wanted to late in any case

You lay very near in the bed
The rumors were already fed
You avoided al the time to talk
I found it very hard to walk

I missed your softly whisper
It used to match without drummer
It contained humorous melody
You were such a nice and romantic lady

We were meant to be for each other
The burden was to shared for not to bother
It created gulf and road lay wide open
It took dramatic turn all of sudden

The thick fog darkened the air
Her face was gloom with dark hair
I thought about widened rift
It was strained relation with complete shift

She used to offer very good smile
Complete arm around with jokes for while
They were real shining days to enjoy
Now I looked sad with no mood for joy

It is always bad to live like stranger
You should avoid unpleasant words in anger
It may add fuel to fire and worsen the situation
You should stop once for all its continuation

The best way is to talk freely
Spend the time merrily
No need to go for even slight discomfort
Maintain healthy relation with good rapport

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Finally over

It was all over in a friction of second
Relation froze and matter went out of hand
Eyes wore hostile look and completely changed
Ready for gunning down as if defeat is to be avenged

What else can be expected when relations loose warmth?
Who cares what will be the result or fallout aftermath?
It is simple game of supremacy to witness the down fall
Idiotic behaviour to go after blood thirsty call

One dropp of lemon is enough to spoil bucket of milk
Dark spot can be easily noticed on the white silk
Strained relation too can’t be hidden for a long period
Some one has to step in to mange the show or avoid

Serious efforts are needed finally at least
Its seriousness is definitely hidden in cloudy mist
One little attempt can really make the difference
One has to learn how to live with and draw the interference

Small action or little gesture can stave off the situation
One may think positive and go for evaluation
Little give and take may lead to happy solution
Why then are we not following with firm resolution?

Relations are like thin thread loosely attached
No one knows when they will be slightly detached?
Seriousness of thoughts and approach should be strengthened
Cement it further, grow with mutual trust and areas widened

Blood relations sometime come to rescue not immediately
Their action and reaction is felt slowly and lately
Warmth and futility is proved in the real crisis or test
Human relations grow and thrive it for best

It may take even longer than expected to build
Result may be known when start gradually to yield
It s fruit can be enjoyed for years to come
Any deviation or sordidness is never welcome

I shall prefer isolation or remain in dark
If simple talk is termed to dog’s bark
It can easily vitiate and lead to spark
Enough to destroy………………….

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Net Relation

It is net relation
But with full of questions
With fear, mistrust and doubts
And much more to talk about

I asked for picture
She sensed it as unsure future
'Some one may use it to malign' she told
It was good now for me not to insist and resign

I wait till that time
Until she may say next time
Of not then some other times
She may say 'I shall give you any time'

She will reassure me
To feel not bad but frank and free
'Time is not opportune and perfect
'Only you have to act' she may sight the fact

Even if you don't get it
The stage is already set for it
Picture or no picture
We are very much close for sure

'You are now close friend'
And may remain so till the end 'she may look up
Yet I miss her face
And think why this chase is? I shall see her and shut up

Say never anything like 'no'
But cautiously observe and go
Make it smooth for river water to flow
Never in haste loose the patience and blow

You may get nothing in return
Then it will be her turn
She may ask funny things to answer
Almost all may like it as rainy showers

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Closeness

Hello and little smile brings us so close
Reddishness on cheeks and ready for pose
Exchange of promises and trust to repose
All on sound basis and nothing to suppose

Relation mushroom with development of intimacy
It is genuine feeling and doesn’t involve hypocrisy
How best to die for each other is order of the day
Search for genuine relationship in honourable way

It is not limited or confined to gender feeling
Relation is built up purely on honest dealing
What matters more is utmost will and good faith
Slight compromise leads to break up or death

It is unbearable pain when comes separation
It doesn’t matter or count what the duration (was)
Life doesn’t end with break up, failure or sordid affair
It has happy ending with means always fair

If you have resolve to sail in rough weather
Adding sweetness and glory to your feather
Nobody can storm or vitiate the relation
Life is full of joy with happiness and sensation

To cast doubt means end of cordiality
Halt in warmth relation and start of hostility
Hurling of abuses and accusing to each other
May sour the relation with more to bother

Closeness may add to strengthening the bond
New intimate relation and better relation fond
Better understanding to over come and excel in field
Complement to each other not to course or yield

Lovely life is reflected in every mode or corner
Flame is coming out clean and bright from burner
What actually you need is sincere cleansing
Presentation of real show without any mincing

Not hollowness in action but holistic approach
Swing in action without any help from coach
May ultimately lead to and bring happiness
Intimacy is after all………………………..

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A mere thread

You were not mere a thread
There was so much to read
You kept us loosely connected
We remained together and acted

You were real cementing force
There lay a wide open course
You had it deliberately chosen
The relation remained warm and not frozen

There has to be some one who can balance
He can assert the authority in presence
There is urgent need to keep all together
You are true force and provide a breather

I wish everybody to have some invisible force
There may not be any cause for pain or remorse
It may be avoided with valuable advice
There may be peace and lie will be spend with ease

The head of the family may have same role
He is there as balancing force or neutral pole
Every one feel secured with no worry at all
He is towering strength and impregnable wall

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A hollow promises

Hollow promises
Unethical behavior
Double speak
Unholy alliance

Abnormal life
Deception
Treachery
All right principles

No happiness
All sufferings
No support
No relation
Tragic end

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An ego in love

You may have an ego
Ego about skin and beauty but not to let it go
Claim for special attention
Want praise and mention

Love may see no color
No cast, no hazard or concern for
She will long for close stay
You should not leave her and go away

Leave aside your reservation
Go for and search real relation
There is hidden joy for elevation
There can't be comparison of any equation

Ask for restoration of bond
Rest all should come second
He is your love and real one
You can't find like him any one

It is his sincerity and deep feeling
He still wants you and very much willing
Grab the opportunity and act fast
You love must stay forever and last

Hold his hand and walk side by side
Love should be like sky and very wide
Its conception is not easy to understand
If you fail by any of the reason then act as friend

Watch it from distance
Never try even at once
The time has passed off and missed
Now all that link must be ceased

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Deep but not shallow

I would love to take dip in deep
I would frown but not prefer to weep
What is that what looks is not real?
What is use of medicine that can't heal?

Poet should be honest and good
Her/his thoughts should serve as tonic or food
Can it not have excellent edge?
Will it have to wait for advancement of age?

How can you be defined?
Until you don't stand it refined?
Purest thought may emerge and spread
Either you have to be lead or lead

What matters more is real attachment?
Why it should be taken as detachment?
What happens if nothing is received as comment?
Have we to feel bad or lament?

Well it is how you take it
Light is light whether bright or dimly lit
Poet may shed his tears through words
May it serve as sharp as edge of swords

Hardness is not subject for expression
It is self assessment or obsession
Mildness is treasure in our possession
It may come to fore in any of the session

I don't have to be deep to make it shallow
Let the natural things come out and flow
Who are we to make it or allow?
I may guess or try to follow

It may prove as magnetic pull
It may attract with force as full
Why to worry about who pulls and from where?
There is something which emerges from somewhere

I shall go by nature's law
I may be new or simply raw
But is it not the mere feeling?
Who may respond it as simply willing?


It will be sheer folly to follow the suit
It has nothing like see or wait
It has nothing to do with fate
There is nothing like early nor late

Why poles are being kept apart?
Where from you began or start?
Are they not destined to be big part?
We have to gain more but nothing to apart

They have been termed different in temperament
Different conclusions with separate comments
One is extremely cold, unbearable and inhospitable
Another one easy to access and compatible

I would love not to be amused
May have fair ideas but not confused
It is how you take and present?
Wise counsel not to be absent

Soul may not go for it or search
Good philosopher may have to make research
I am for sure it has some holy connection
Is it waiting for any direction or action?
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